My name is Toe'umu, I got to room 6 at wesley intermediate school. While being teached by Miss peterson. I like you're poem, and I love the images you've put in your post! This reminds me of when I did this activity yesturday! Maybe next time you could credit your images that you find.
Ata Mārie Faith, I hope you are having a groovy day so far!
Thanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I like how descriptive it is and how you’ve said what you’d do on the moon. The photos you’ve added are beautiful too - great image choice. If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you?
In order to get the full points for this activity though, have another look at the activity instructions. This activity actually ask you to write a poem describing how you would feel if you were to first set foot on the moon. You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new post with the correct activity :)
Also, next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the post, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
I’m looking forward to reading your updated post, Faith. Happy blogging! Eliza :)
Hello Faith,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Toe'umu, I got to room 6 at wesley intermediate school. While being teached by Miss peterson. I like you're poem, and I love the images you've put in your post! This reminds me of when I did this activity yesturday! Maybe next time you could credit your images that you find.
Blog ya later,
Toe'umu.
Ata Mārie Faith, I hope you are having a groovy day so far!
ReplyDeleteThanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I like how descriptive it is and how you’ve said what you’d do on the moon. The photos you’ve added are beautiful too - great image choice. If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you?
In order to get the full points for this activity though, have another look at the activity instructions. This activity actually ask you to write a poem describing how you would feel if you were to first set foot on the moon. You can either edit this post or delete it and create an entirely new post with the correct activity :)
Also, next time you use images from the internet, make sure you attribute the image - this just means copy the link from where you found the image and put it next to the image on the post, so we can see exactly where you found it :)
I’m looking forward to reading your updated post, Faith. Happy blogging!
Eliza :)
ReplyDeleteAhiahi pai Faith,
Thanks for editing your post, I really like what you’ve written - ka pai! I can really get a sense of what it must be like on the moon.
Have a fabulous afternoon,
Eliza :)